on the night of Halloween, 2 sisters got lost in the forest to get food for their parents that did not really live that far. One of the sisters got lost halfway and the other just walked on thinking the other was with her. When the sister notices that her twin got lost, she notices that she has lost herself too. For a few hours she has been crying all night and fell into a deep pit full of snakes, What do you think happens next?

How many different endings can you get? Which ending do you prefer?


48 thoughts on “Story

  1. Wow! this story gives chills! I think that the sister that fell in the pit will slowly die while the other is sound a sleep, the death of the sister will probably cause the other to go on an adventure looking for her. The investigation that the twin goes on can also lead to her death.
    Great story, and nice suspense, it really give context to this picture and creates something extraordinary.
    Here is the link to my story:
    Maybe you can create a spooky end to this.

    • I am planning on actually giving an end thats especially spooky!

      Thank you for commenting πŸ™‚

  2. I like your story. I like it because it is creative and it allows others to interact with the story. It’s very cool!

    • Thank you, Do you have any ideas for the end ? I was hoping for it to be cool, thank you!

  3. i like that you made it a Halloween story the day after Halloween which i think is pretty cool because. it is my favorite time of year to scar people.

    • Its my favorite month of the year as well! That was my goal actually and that is how I got that idea!
      Thank you

  4. Your story is very interesting and suspenseful. What I think happens next is her twin sister that she got separated from will come find her and save her. Keep blogging!

  5. I love your post! I like how you made the ending something that lets the reader make up their own ending! Great ideas!

  6. Ohhh that’s a good prompt! It kind of reminds me of the scene in Batman where Bruce Wayne falls into the hole that’s full of bats and they scare him so much that he cries.

  7. I loved how you gave us a cliff hanger and wow you are good keep up the good work!

  8. I like how you started a story on 2 lost twin sisters. Earlier, I read someone who had started their story about 2 brothers that ran away and are lost in the forest and there is a prisoner who had escaped from prison. Also, they have stumbled upon the highway and a car is coming. Finally, the 2 brothers hope that it is their parents looking for them and not the escaped prisoner.

    • Oh my Gosh! That is so smart I would really want to read this story and wonder what happens next!

    • Personally I would want her too! I am frightened by snakes just the sound of it makes me cringe !!

  9. I like your story. I like it because it is creative and it allows others to interact with the story. It’s very cool!

  10. I liked your story! The suspense was AMAZING! I think that the sister who fell into a deep pit full of snakes will get bitten by a certain snake that gives her venomous powers!

  11. I like your story it is really creative i like the part where she didn’t know her sister was gone

  12. that was a very good story and I like the fact that you ended with a cliffhanger to make them wonder what happens next.

  13. I love the way you made it feel spooky. Why did you want to write about this certain topic.

    • I have a fear of snakes. Since it was Halloween especially, I decided to write about them. Thanks for the Question !

  14. I really like your story. We had to so something like this everyday last year in one of my classes

  15. I would like to see a good outcome so I think her sister will get there just in time to help her get out of the pit! Their are really only 2 outcomes.

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